The presentation below outlines the audience feed back received and reasons for the feedback and what we could do to improve our trailer in order to receive a more positive response a second time.
Additionally, I have incorporated a slide show of all of the comments we received from channel 4.
Audience Feedback on Prezi
Furthermore, though films cool we had a feed back session to go over some of our rough edits of some of the scenes we merged together using Final Cut and IMovie. Below shows a video of some of the comments i received and ways of how I can improve my editing skills in order to cater to a modern 21 century audience and how to enrapture their attention and desire to watch the film.
During the session, Jesse O Mahoney, an industry professional television script writer gave his views and constructive criticism on how to improve our trailer. He stated that he was unfamiliar with who the female at the end was and that a voice over or some indication of who she might be will be appropriate in order to engage the audience and inform them appropriately. After this session his advice was taken into account and vast changes were made in order to make the piece look more like a trailer and build to a climax, and to overall emphasise the horror elements to make the audience scared yet excited.
Through the screen at channel 4 we were also luckily awarded with a certificate or the best use of sound. This award represents our successful use of apply conventions of trailers according to sound. The image below shows the certificate we were awarded at channel 4 studios.
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